With my teeth chattering
The wind howling
My feet curling
A spattering of rain
The tingling chill
An icy window
My arms crossed
The frozen floor
Shaken and stirred
The brisk air
Thinking to myself:
This is Southern California
Why is it so freaking cold?!
6 comments:
i helped out your sister last night! i'm not a server or anything. i work as a busgirl sometimes
:) a rather sweet poem. lol.... i love cold, though we hardly get any in this part of India. may be i should head for mountains ...
Umm yeah its quite cold here too but probably it wont be as cold as southern California.. :)
I loved this! So expressive! So down-to-the-frozen-earth!
You should try living where I am in the Freakin' North!
Kat
Here's a poem for you:
http://hyggedigter.blogspot.com/2008/04/would-you-believe-it.html
I don't think that url copied well. There's a "/would" after the date.
http://hyggedigter.blogspot.com/2008/04/would-you-believe-it.html
Loved this, it expresses just how cold it has been here in California.
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