Tuesday, September 08, 2009

Lack of Thrust

A foggy haze
Blankets the sky
Motionlessly calm
Struggling to fly

The muggy heat
Reeks of listlessness
Lost for words
Drowsy eagerness

Tirelessly faint
Blurred attention
Heavy weights
Slows the ascension

Bites the dust
Soulless wandering
Lack of thrust


Ahsan said...

It seems that the lines of this poem tells my own thought

aria said...

I hear you ..

Mj said...

soon we enter fall and with that cooler weather. energy levels will be back to normal capacity soon. great poem.

thanks for stopping by my blog and leaving a comment. hope to see you again soon. have a great night.

Michelle Johnson said...

oops! forgot to say that I like your picture. the one in the sidebar is great too.

i was signed in (comment above, Mj) to a different account so it won't lead back to anything really if you follow it. sorry.

Deborah Godin said...

Yes, that's just how it is in the heat and humidity!

Yoli said...

Elegant poem, full of pain and feeling.

Karen said...

Oh, I've felt this, too often...

Thanks for dropping by keeping secrets.

Jill said...

I think we all feel like this from time to time...hopefully not often.